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RWBY Character Comcept

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So, I've gotten into RWBY recently, so I went ahead and made a little OC. 
He's not great, but he is mine, and so I am proud of him. U v U

Name: Mars Ketsuki
Land of Origin: Vale
Race: Human
Weapons(s): Crimson Muramasa
Semblance: Crimson Legion
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Outfit: Black, Crimson, Carmine
Accessories: Belts, Vambraces
Handedness: Right
Complexion: Pale White
Hieght: 6 feet 3 inches (2 meters)
Weight: 197 lbs (89.3 kilo)
Eye color: Muted Crimson
Hair color: Dark Grey and red
Affiliation(s): Beacon Academy
Occupation: Student (junior level)
Team: (Undetermined)
Partner: (Undetermined)

Semblance

His semblance functions in a similar way to Blake’s and Sun’s in that it creates copies. However, it is different in that it creates up to 6 clones at a time, but he rarely if ever uses all 6, the drawback to this is though the clones can move, they only last for about 30 seconds as it requires focus to keep them stable. However, he is not known for using his semblance in standard combat unless he is at a severe disadvantage or requires a distraction. He is also known for using all six of them for a fatal technique called Punishing Star, in which all six of his clones, in addition to him, surround a target and impale it from all sides.
Because of the rarity of his use of his semblance, most believe that his semblance is speed, much like Ruby, but he is simply so experienced due to his seniority that “time seems to move slower” for him and his reaction time is incredibly precise. In battle he can seem almost disinterested in fighting, as his expression can be very flat and unreadable, but he is in fact focusing intensely to not only learn his enemy before really engaging, but so as not to “give the enemy any idea that he is afraid of them.”

Backstory

Mars grew up in a small village town east of Vale’s capital with his father and mother. He was an only child and had few friends, however, he still loved to meet new people and was taught a strong sense of right and wrong from his mother and father. As a child he showed signs of using his aura at a young age, and so his father began training him to be a hunter. He was only nine years old and had only been trained for about a year when he first learned to use his semblance and killed his first Grimm. He showed promise, but his happiness would not last long.
Shortly after he was returning home after having gone for a walk out in the woods near his home when he heard the sounds of screams and gunfire. Mars ran home to find his father holding the dead and bloodied corpse of his mother as he sat propped against the side of their home. Mars ran to his father’s side to find that his father was not long for this world as well, as he had a massive and deep claw wound in his chest and when Mars tried to assist his father he simply handed Mars his sword and told him to “Leave me… it will take too long to get me any help… just take this and live… live for me… live for your mother, and don’t ever give up…. you’re the last of us, Mars… don’t let the story end like this….”
Mars buried his parents with the help of the families that had been family friends and packed his things to find a new home. He eventually made his way to the capital city in the attempt to find his way in the world, though the recent memory of his parent’s death left him angry and bitter that he had not been there when they needed him most.
He worked hard and tried his best to make his family proud, but living in the city was hard and he often got in fights in the city. It was in the city that he finally learned to use his father’s weapon, which he had named Crimson Muramasa. He was being threatened by a Hunter in training who was attending Beacon Academy, and he fought him to a near standstill when the fight was interrupted my Glynda Goodwitch as the fight was drawing attention. She brought both the student and Mars to Headmaster Ozpin, and Ozpin gave Mars a choice. Ozpin saw the potential in Mars and said if he would enroll in Signal and then come to Beacon afterword to train to become a real Hunter that he would let the transgression slide and take care of all of it. Mars knew he had no other choice but to say yes, and in the end he knew this decision would make his parents proud of him.
He excelled and made it to Beacon in no time to fulfill his deal with Ozpin, who became a counselor and mentor to him over the years.

Personality

In most cases, Mars is shown as a rather calm and relaxed individual due to the lessons he’s learned from Ozpin. He still has the capacity for intense anger if pushed far enough, much like Yang, but it takes quite a bit to get him that far without doing something like disrespecting his parents or threatening/harming those he cares for, as he has a strong sense of loyalty and family. He can be quite humorous at times, given that he has a silver tongue from living on the streets as a boy, and can turn people’s words on them very easily. He often employs such a tactic on enemies if he is trying to goad them into a trap. He is also known for heavily supporting the faunace cause and will often go out of his way to help out for the sake of equality and fairness.
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LaReforma1857's avatar
Cool design and weapon. What is his inspiration?